Tokyo Contest

Nicely done, her pose is solid and the coloring fits the character and does add volume to the body, the metals effect is good which fits the soft-cel-shading used on the all drawing. You used 3 zones of color in a very effective way.

Her visible arm looks a bit odd, as if her hand is turned differently than her forearm, her other arm or part of it could be visible at least a bit.

Did you use the Ziio for the line art ? I notice the DragonBall Z influence in the proportions and shape of her head and eyes.